Registered: May 2004
Location: Huizen, Netherlands
Maurice Anemaat - M4
ok, my 2nd track... tried to involve my keyboard a bit in this one. The solo might in the end might need to be fixed a little, so I would really like to know what you guys think about it, not only the solo but the song as one. Thank you!
Registered: May 2004
Location: Huizen, Netherlands
when I tried to upload it my i-net was doing very strange! Now all is working... Please gimme me your comments!
Jul-07-2004 09:36
soundrush
aka Charlie Brownz
Registered: Mar 2004
Location: In A Loop
hey mate, sounds abit housy.... anyway, very chilled, i like the song.
bassline is nice (but it could be some harder/more edgy) that lead is cool (like the moog, if its a moog).
some suggestions: mastering is ok (everything sounds clear to me) but i would use some other drums (a harder bassdrum and some unique percusions). add some more reverb and delay to the synths (whole song needs more depth).
cheers
niklas
Jul-07-2004 10:14
pho mo
tropical bliss
Registered: Jan 2004
Location: Darwin
first impressions:
bass drum sounds a little hollow
love the percussion that comes in around 0:37
all the elements coming together at 1:15 sounds great! but i wouldn't overdo the legato arp just after that
synth at 2:35 is real nice
The keyboard solo is cool, but the sound is just a little bit piercing, perhaps fatten it up a little?
3:57 - yow! that hurts
overall this track has a really nice feel to it, excellent atmosphere and great melody lines. just maybe work on the little details a bit more. nice work!
Registered: May 2004
Location: Huizen, Netherlands
Thanks for the positive feedback! I will make the changes right away No critics on the solo? I have the feeling it ain't a good melody yet...
Jul-07-2004 14:29
DJGemini69
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Nov 2003
Location: Tempe, Arizona
Very nice!!
As a DJ, I love the fact that this tune is mixable right from the start; nice heavy beats. The melody is great too! Very trance!!! Great job on this song, in my opinion anyway. I would love to use this in my upcoming mix, if that's ok. Seems like people here don't like to ASK, they just do it. No money involved, just publicity and play for your song. You can have a gander at the second trance mix on my site at http://www.djgemini69.com or on DJ Ryan Clark's site at http://www.djryanclark.com He was the one that approached me to do some mixes for his site! Check it out and email me at [email protected]
I will be looking forward to hearing from you soon!
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DJ Digital Gem
(formerly DJGemini69)
No critics on the solo? I have the feeling it ain't a good melody yet...
