Hi, i just had a listen to your track. My opinions might be irellavent to you but some people think my advice or knowledge is top of the line and some people say i have no idea what the hell im talking about. So judge for yourself.

Basically when i first started the song i knew strait away it was gonna be fairly heavy. has a nice beat and its pretty full. The songs a great idea and well worthy of a play on Digitally imported but label wise its not quite up there. The song has talent and if you can make tracks like this then you must be pretty Talented to. (Perry said u have a talented body btw :P )

Basically i think the song lacks Originality and its pretty Basic in ways. It was just the same old beat, fade off, build up, beat senario.
What i sugest u do is try to enhance the situation but dont make a mess of it. Try to put some Originality into it and make the Tranquility more effective.

Its like Tiesto said "So many People have computers and are making music now days, labels dont look for just good music they look for that extra special thing in a person"

Hope i helped in some way

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Pedro de Hansome

It's definitely a nice tune!
You've obviously got the talent to make a killer tune. Keep it up, and good luck dude!

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Monsoon - Astrosurf

thankies
:P

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B r e a t h

mint start, bass sounds nice..kick also.

clap sounds a bit loud not to much 2-4 less volume i say.

the acid stab could be morhped in to an acidline would be cooler..

nice pads on the background in the intro.

nice melody in the break, but it could use some nice pads , the ones are playing are to thin..

melody sounds nice, but it's very muddy..

smooth out the snare roll. + its a bit to loud i think.

i like the additional riff on top of the lead..really nice.

don't see anything new added, so i don't think you should extend the track to a second climax.

overall a nice solid production, it needs just better edits and better mix, this has potential just need work.

Dana hmm, girl? if yes , cool to see girls making this kinda uplifting music .

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

thanks , and yes im a girl

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B r e a t h

yay, awesome to see a girl posting music.

I don't think it's a bad tune, just what everyone else says, could use a bit of an original punch. You obviously can throw a song together, just keep plodding.

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~Jessicah~
http://www.freewebs.com/dj-jessicah/

Nice driving tune. Sent you a PM.

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hey,
First off nice track!!
I guess I would only say make that first synth after the break have less delay, and make it sound a bit more atmospheric if you know what I mean. It comes in kind of sudden and harsh. It sounds like its trying to hard,, lighten it up a bit... I think I would play with it more too, as in introduce it in later maybe. Anyways just little gripes about a rad track though!

g2g bed

I'd say the main thing to change would be the lead. To me it sounds a bit dry and in the background, the track would have more power if you brought it forward. Otherwise very nice! A bit standard yes, but technically very sound.

And yeah, I think you're like the first female trance producer Nice one.

Clap is too loud! I like percusions.
Some sounds needs more FX like reverb...
I like your track till clap kicks in.

intro to the break is WICKED, with that very strange FX sample, wikkewikkewoh it sounds like that . I dont like that sine sound in the break, but i like the saw synth that comes up next, very atmospheric. Bassline owns, nuf said about bassline . Climax is OK, melody isnt really good, but i like that small FX so much so i keep listening . I like the 2nd melo line. Build off is ok

- V.Vision

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