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well, first off, because the sample starts from the middle of the break, i cant tell if what im hearing is appropriate for what im not hearing.
i really feel im missing a lot in here in terms of prespective, and i dont feel i can evaluate the construction of the track.
however, i can evaluate the mastering and the content to some extant:
the kick needs some more compression imo,
the piano is a bit muddy for me, while the pads are just beautiful.
and your missing something in the upper-middle end.
some more fx would be appropriate (as mentioned by someone else).
i would add another melody, from a diffrent source, probably something like a flute (that should cover the upper-middle end), something more catchy, even cheesy if necassery.
overall: donnow really,,, experimental stuff.

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