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Don't do that. People will get to you when they feel like it, not because you ram it down their throats by bumping it constantly.

It would be a good idea to post a bit less tracks at once as well.

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Originally posted by Mr.Mystery Don't do that. People will get to you when they feel like it, not because you ram it down their throats by bumping it constantly. It would be a good idea to post a bit less tracks at once as well.

Sorry bout that mate, its just that its hard to get litenned to sometimes here, but I'll respect your advice.

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Originally posted by Dr. Pils Sorry bout that mate, its just that its hard to get litenned to sometimes here, but I'll respect your advice.

Yeah, it is hard, there are so many people in here nowadays that it might be hard to get noticed. The best way is to be active, give feedback and pointers and take part in discussions at the production forum and eventually things will start to pick up. It wasn't easy for us "oldies" in the beginning either...

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i hate that vocal sample, its way to loud and is just a raw sound. and i dont see the point in the vocal being there. why do people needs reminding that its a dr pills remix every 10 seconds!? lol. also, the kick is very flat and weak. I think the whole thing is very repetative. personally, i dont like it, but keep up the work and see where you get to.

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Originally posted by Mike_Foyle i hate that vocal sample, its way to loud and is just a raw sound. and i dont see the point in the vocal being there. why do people needs reminding that its a dr pills remix every 10 seconds!? lol. also, the kick is very flat and weak. I think the whole thing is very repetative. personally, i dont like it, but keep up the work and see where you get to.

Alot of people have said that... I guess I'm just full of myself. But I kinda liked that raw sound so I left it, thanx for listenning.

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i think you have a clear cut image of what you want your music to sound like in your head, which is a good thing, as you learn to translate that image into music more accurately youll get alot better at producing. with some time i think you could be doing quite well. deffo get rid of that vocal, its awful! without that and with a new kick it woudlnt be a bad track

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Originally posted by Mike_Foyle i think you have a clear cut image of what you want your music to sound like in your head, which is a good thing, as you learn to translate that image into music more accurately youll get alot better at producing. with some time i think you could be doing quite well. deffo get rid of that vocal, its awful! without that and with a new kick it woudlnt be a bad track

Thanx for the advice mate.

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Originally posted by Dr. Pils BOOST!

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ya vocal is weird, to loud as well.

weird sounds but not bad, well i wouldn't repeat the vocal at all.

sorry the vocal is really ruining it.

from 1.05 that lead that comes up is really nice, snare is a bit to loud and the kick can be tougher.

2.25 that synth that that comes in sounds ocol as well, i like weird dreamy sounds or synths.

that snare roll didn't make the track explode like i hoped to, it is on the repetative side.

nice ideas and melodies and synths imo, but that vocal just ruined it and made me deaf on headphones it's panned and to loud.

good luck

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That vocal just gets annoying, the drums need more work, and the synth with the rising pitch is really annoying. Also, it feels too slow, but that's more personal preference.

However, if this is what it sounded like in your head, then that's good that you can translate what's in your head to your music like that.