Hmm, take a further look into the mastering, the bass/beat combo is overpowering just about everything else. They also sound quite muffled/lofi.
Your synths sound very thin and softwarey (Subtractor?), try adding multiple layers and unison to them. Your percs are also way too simplistic (or just drowned out by the bass) and don't create any kind of drive to the track. They also seem to be the same throughout the track, a bit of variation would be good.
I would also consider putting a longer breakdown in there and something different for the second part, it gets a bit too repetitive towards the end.

All in all you have a good melody and some nice ideas here but your production needs tightening up.

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Originally posted by Mr.Mystery Hmm, take a further look into the mastering, the bass/beat combo is overpowering just about everything else. They also sound quite muffled/lofi. Your synths sound very thin and softwarey (Subtractor?), try adding multiple layers and unison to them. Your percs are also way too simplistic (or just drowned out by the bass) and don't create any kind of drive to the track. They also seem to be the same throughout the track, a bit of variation would be good. I would also consider putting a longer breakdown in there and something different for the second part, it gets a bit too repetitive towards the end. All in all you have a good melody and some nice ideas here but your production needs tightening up.

got it
will keep workin at it

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superb stuff once again mate, where do you get those melodies LOL excellent!

One of the synths used in the melody, starts early in the track with the lead/buildup, is a god awful (sounds like it came off a NES), but the melody itself is massive and beautifully arranged. Nice production, although it seems the mastering needs a bit of work?

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great track, can't really hear that typical softwaresound, imo it sounds good, just need a big portion of work at the mixing stage.

ohh and btw. make shure you don't forget to cut at 16000hz when you master it, my ears are bleading from the high frequencies right now

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