hey buro

nice bassline bass also.

about the melody, synth sounds cool, but the melody is not really special, it needs something special on top of it.

and no not that 0.43, you need an riff or special sounding arp i think, this is a bit standard saw thing

perc still need some stuff, but as you said it's under construction.

nice small synths and effects on the background btw

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

I have updated it, check it

yeah, great bass kick with that little rim-thing backing it. Great percs here.
Yup...Massive is right, nice bassline.
I like the chimey-bell synth!!! 2:00 break... not workin for me though.
That saw pad doesnt seem to mesh with your overall idea...find something to better match that bellish synth, cuz it needs more prominence IMO.

Luv it Luv it! Bring it more!

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please review my latest AMBIENT track HERE.

thanx for your opinion....I have changed some sounds, check it

I have added piano...check please

I have done some changes to this...if ya want, then check....

I know that maybe noone will reply this but for me is that enough, that only listen to this

Have done some other changes...

listening atm - nice kick, shakers sound odd for some reason! Great bassline sound and the plucky synth is fab - erm not sure the guitar riff suits; though it progresses well! Pads are very subtle - nice touch! Piano - erm not me I'm affraid! Break ok thought the transition could have been better! overall pretty good! I have written the points as I've listened so please bare with me on that!

Got great potential... love to hear the finished article!

Bit of a production spam thread, but I love your stuff so I listened anyway...

This one sounds great man, the bass sound you've achieved throughout the last half of the song is really excellent. The breakbeat started off a bit weak, but became pretty funky.

Finish it off already!

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