:O toronto hehe
i live in toronto too (thornhill, where vaughan is, u anywhere near me?)
k ur track: the kick is weak, need stronger percs, i can see ur just starting out in producing, thats ok, ur melody i can see will improve a lot in time (if u keep practicing) not that the melody is bad, its pretty good actually, i like the bass
all u gotta do is fix the kick/percs/mastering pretty much, the mixing sounds ok for now,
but ur getin there m8, ur ideas are already really good, something i know when i hear upcoming producers
k hear u l8r

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Hey, thank you for your comment. I realized there were a few
issues with the track, so here is another improved fixed version:

Newer Fixed Version