Hah, this is not what I expected when I was gonna listen

I think it has a cool atmosphere, very nice beat.
I love the melody, it's very simple but beautiful imo. Very thin though, maybe add more layers and fill up some empty spaces. It definitively need something more.

There's a lot of stuff to work on, mastering, perc, hats, melody.
It's not done yet imo, get back to work!
I like the idea, you just need to finish it off. So far quite alright, but some serious editing is neccessary.

And oh, I would lower those claps and maybe the piano a little bit.
That's all.

mmm, the beats sound REALLY fruity loops, lol, the whole track does actually
its all too fruity tooty :S
u do have some ideas, very chilly track, ur def. on the right direction in producing, keep practicing m8, the only bad thing, is that it sounds fruity, but thats ok, wont be long before u make it pro, its already pretty good as it is, really nice piano and pads
ait, ttyl

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Hm... ill definitely get back to work... thanx guys for your insights. I definitely agree thats fruity... well it used fruityloops...lol. And that sound is also ticking me off, it's one of fruityloops' bugs.

Thanx very much

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