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hi a98.
sorry man i find this one very hard to listen too, it seems to lack a serious amount of energy, transistions, effects, percussion, synths, basically its lacking layers in my opinion. and it sounds somewhat out of tune on the main melody. it might just be because its in lo-fi but i'm not feeling it.
production and mastering wise thou i'd say its very good since this is 64kbps and it still sounds very nice and clean.
in my opinion i think you need to introduce more elements, so the bassline does'nt get boring and structure the melody at the break better by using nice big strings or synths.
sorry if i'm sounding harsh but when i hear a producer with obvious talent i feel they should get the necassary honest feedback. listening from the point of view of a potential label owner who would maybe know sweet FA about production and just basically liking or not liking what he hears.
p.s. i'm only producing 6months or so and nearly finished mastering my second tune so when i stick it up soon, you can slate me too bits hehe 
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Nope, the melody isn't making its way into my heart.. Totally uninteresting melody, imo. And in the mainpeart, the pads are too loud. If you mute them on your mixer, everything would probably sound very empty, because they are filling alot of space in the soundpicture at the moment...
