Please give some feedback about my new tune:

Krivi - Commodore

respect to all

I like it for my playing tastes. I focus on live pa and this track would be nice and easy to mix in and out live. From that perspective it's great. From what I've read in others posts there will probably be someone saying to layer things in using a subtle fashion... personally I like the way new peices kick in and out with the loop or cymbal crash. It works in its own way here, not something everytrack can pull off.
I could make comments about the baseline and kick but it has a style that works here again and I don't mind it one bit.
Its very nice and dreamy in the middle and ending.
the part I would fase out more gradually would be the synth that dissapears at the 8:30 and then also the one at 8:59. It just sounds too abrupt of a stop for those sounds at that part in the end.

Wow, that's a nice song. It is rather good and it has kind a style kind of like some PVD songs, where it's somewhat simplistic, but that makes the song work well, especially for DJs to play. Have you made any other productions?

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thanx a lot...
yes i have remix of Paul Van Dyk - Forbidden Fruits you can check it here:
http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...threadid=217336

Sweet

As said already, it is simplistic, not very thick or complete, and the bassline is really easy and nothing special. But, it still works alright and I actually like it.

Just having a listen now dude i like the 1st melody and the pads they sound cool. Im not sure about th bass though but the piano is very nice, this tune has a nice chill feel to it. Good work, but like others have said it could do with somthing else.

its got a good feel to it...

like everyone has said its simple & it works...

good track...