hello
ive done new track, its something different, less uplifting more energetic i hope all feedbacks are welcome :

Mane - Factory
http://www.sitesled.com/members/man...]%20[Final].mp3

greetings

Lukas

link updated for those who want have full version (heh is there anyone who actually want it lol ), i shortened track about 2 min , deleted breakbeat part, deleted bass at breakdown, add new pads enjoy

Last edited by Mane on Dec-12-2004 at 14:39

W00t, feel the energy!!

So much stuff happening in this tune... the bass is immense... funky percussion... every synth feels alive. I'm at the 3.00 mark an I have no faults so far. Definate floorfilla.

--joey

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I really like this one.

Repetive, but I don't really mind it to be honest. There was no real climax I was hoping for, and the bassline kind of took over the role as the melody, hehe

It has energy, it sounds very full and quality is good.
Great tune overall

Lots of energy in the song, nice job on the synths. The one thing that seems to be lacking is one lead synth that stands out and takes the song to the next level.

till 2.16 i missed some synths or something that would build up.

nice beat though.

Saw melodie is to basic imo that kicks in, the beat is to uplifting not techy.

I wouldn't done that breakbeat just go to the break, or els it takes to long.

Not really feeling the pads.

yea miss a climax then.

iT has an awesome beat you should do more with it, this is just to basic, write a melodie maybe? and do some bass chord changes.

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OK..
- The kick and the percussions are great, loved them.
- The bass is good but I think it should be louder. The main synth needs to be louder too IMO.
- I think you should remove the percs in the break.
- Nice string in the break, but you need to add a couple more layers to it, make it thicker.
- Melody is good but you should work on it, make it more "complicated" IMO.
Overall good job, but the track is rather simple, and I don't really feel the energy in it.

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It's definately energetic. Lovin the synth that comes in around 2:40.
That switch up around 4:00 got me moving some more
You might wanna add a few more pads to give it a fuller sound. Nice job with the tune man.

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Hi,

nice energetic trancer - love the percs.

the main melody needs some work. And when the beat kicks in at 4:03, something is off-key. There's a clash of notes, and I think its the melody and bass.

Anyway, you're on the right track - keep it up,
Trevor

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Good percs. I like.

I'm not really feeling the hats in the breakdown. They're not helping with the feel. Maybe just have bongos going.

I dunno. I can't really feel this energy that everyone's talking about. There's not enough going on to really make me want to dance. I think, looking back, that your bassline could have been more pronounced, and your pads could have been thicker, maybe. Your leads were also very flat and uninteresting.

Hey Mane
nice strong kick and percs as others siad, good solid bass as well
one suggestions, dont the beats go on for so long, like upto 3 minutes, only beats... add soem more elements into there to make it interesting
ur sounds are all good, melody kind of reminds me of my old productions hehe, to be honest, not my type, but its good improvement...
keep it comin m8

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thx guys for replies my intention wasnt make uplifting trance but something more simply without too many melodies

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