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eirforce
tranceaddict in training



Registered: Oct 2004
Location: Manchester / Dublin
Tracks I've produced - any chance of some feedback ?

Hi all,

Anybody want to giving me some (brutally honest, if necessary) feedback to some of the tracks I've produced ?

The later ones are obviously a bit better as I (hope I) have improved a bit...

www.djeirforce.com/tracks

Bear with me on the website, it's still under construction.

Cheers,
AJ
aka eirforce

Old Post Nov-10-2004 16:33  Ireland
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MisterSofty6502
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Registered: Sep 2004
Location: Mount Vernon

28 Drinks Later (Global Drunks's Wrecked Mix)

The bass drum could be louder and stronger
the bass synth sounds cheap.
cheap hihat sound try going for another hihat sound
i dont like the melody here that much
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I would make the intro both the kick and bass. Try using stronger bass synths for your basslines,. It would difinitly improve the feel of the song.
what kind of style your trying to produce>???

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They're Here

Nice bass drum intro. needs to be compressed a little and eq
hi hat is good
nice bassline. add some REVERB to the bass and more bass synths
The strings sound good except for when it goes a note down at the end of the pattern
i dont know what happen to the song it was going good all at the beging and then it just got to repitive with me. The melody is not to interesting.

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Aftertouch
Cool sound effect
again the percussion needs some work.
along with the bass. your basslines are good they just need better synths.
Melody needs work
i excpected a trance synth melody bulid up by 3mins but it kinda lost me with the try putting some reverd/delay panning on the gatuir
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Ciúnas
awsome!!!! MELODY. That would be a kick ass trance melody. if you had the right synth for this melody it would kick ass. the drums and kick percussion needs work. but the meoldy is awasome love it

I didnt have time to hear your other tracks but if your begining to produce keep on .... you got the potential


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Old Post Nov-12-2004 00:58  United States
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RiCo
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Registered: Feb 2004
Location: Somewhere

quote:
Originally posted by MisterSofty6502
28 Drinks Later (Global Drunks's Wrecked Mix)

The bass drum could be louder and stronger
the bass synth sounds cheap.
cheap hihat sound try going for another hihat sound
i dont like the melody here that much
--------------------------------------------------------------
Stolen Words

I would make the intro both the kick and bass. Try using stronger bass synths for your basslines,. It would difinitly improve the feel of the song.
what kind of style your trying to produce>???

--------------------------------------------------------------

They're Here

Nice bass drum intro. needs to be compressed a little and eq
hi hat is good
nice bassline. add some REVERB to the bass and more bass synths
The strings sound good except for when it goes a note down at the end of the pattern
i dont know what happen to the song it was going good all at the beging and then it just got to repitive with me. The melody is not to interesting.

---------------------------------------------------------------

Aftertouch
Cool sound effect
again the percussion needs some work.
along with the bass. your basslines are good they just need better synths.
Melody needs work
i excpected a trance synth melody bulid up by 3mins but it kinda lost me with the try putting some reverd/delay panning on the gatuir
----------------------------------------------------------------
Ciúnas
awsome!!!! MELODY. That would be a kick ass trance melody. if you had the right synth for this melody it would kick ass. the drums and kick percussion needs work. but the meoldy is awasome love it

I didnt have time to hear your other tracks but if your begining to produce keep on .... you got the potential



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Old Post Nov-12-2004 01:54  Puerto Rico
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eirforce
tranceaddict in training



Registered: Oct 2004
Location: Manchester / Dublin

Cheers for the feedback MisterSofty, much appreciated.

As I said, I'm still learning, so I've a long way to go. Getting there slowly

Have a listen to "Bulletproof DJ", that's probably the tranciest one I've done.

Cheers,
AJ

Old Post Nov-16-2004 10:22  Ireland
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