Been ages, but finally something is finished!

So surfing the TA midi site, i saw the MIDI and went playing a while back, added few things changed few things, and left it allone.

Today in the morning, Paolo heard it and wanted to join, and yes it worked out great. We both are satisfied since this version adds something new in the climax.

Our collab allias will be Vindication and this is Trance at 140bpm not the usuall prog hehe .

Feedback and comments are welcome

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Fahad and Paul.

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Last edited by Massive84 on Nov-18-2004 at 19:19

Very nice tune u got here , i like the bassline , i suggest improving the pre-melody's synth...i dont like the pads , seems to be weak...
overally nice track but i like the original :P
Peace out mates!

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wooo twisted by design !! my fav' tune at the moment. let me listen to this, i'll be back in a little time for some commenting


ok here we go !

IMO:

* kick is very nice
* dont really like the clap
* percussion is very well done, perhaps a bit simple
* dont really like that 'harsh' synth that comes in around 2:00, would be great without this and with a nice pad in the background really ! take this off please
* overall sound is nice and clean
* now's the break: nice pads, main synth comes in, with a nice relaxing sound behind, i like that !

Overall production quality is very nice as usual, i think that the climax could have been more big tho

well done !

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Last edited by staticblue on Nov-14-2004 at 18:26

hey Massive.

Never heard the original, so all I can say is that this is very moving and sounds like it took a lot of work! The pads, IMO, are the best feature! I do agree with Perry on one thing though...the pre-melody synth doesnt do it for me. I love that midi loop that you have layered on top of the pads....excellent. @7:00 I like the new synth that comes in.

Great Job you two!

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production wise it's good, but i dunno, it is so plain really

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From listening to this - you two are goin to be some team - cause this is fuckin tight!!

It all sounds gd to me - especially the percussion and synths! - I thought the break could have been better - maybe a few more sounds thrown in there? who knows - but gd job guys!

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well listening in my headphones here: kick and bass line not bad, leads are as somebody mentioned plain, and have some of that "digital emptyness" , nice pads in the breackdown. Overall nice try, but need to work the sounds, especially the leads in there a little more, to make it sound real good.

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Nice work guys, there's lots of elements in here that go really well together. The pads are completely lush, and are the best part of this remix. The mixing is superb. I do agree with Montana though, there's some overall dynamic lacking in this version. Excellent production quality though!

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Well thanks everyone

ya pho am very happy you liked the breakdown am so pleased with that part.

but the lead i do agree, am not 100% happy with it, am gonne try to adjust it with paolo after school, but i REALLY tried giving it a different sound but am so done with Reason, i can't do original things anymore, time to move on soon.

thanks for listening everyone.

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I can hear some synths that surely needs more reverb to fit into the song. You have to work on that. Almost every sound you use sounds very dry. Make it more dreamy --> Add reverb. I like the strings though!

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i dont like orginal one so i hope you made something good with it :P
i dont like clap :P, very good bassline, nice acid sound, all fx are very good , but i dont like melodie (its not your fault:P) everything is very good except sound of melodie it sounds to "computery" :P

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