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- i really like the synth in intro and the synth used for the bass, sad to see that lead synth go.
- melody has a nice, almost european touch to it.
- make that synth bass more prominent
- those sounds behind vocals are cool as heck!
- vocals themselves are nice! 
- that lead synth gets a little repetitive.
- the track at around 3:35 seems to be building up towards something. That piano sound nice, but needs to be played in a high energy part! I think you're missing a nice and loud hi-hat.
- Strings are nice with that synth at around 4:30. But sitll need that energy from a fuller hi-hat and some strong percs.
Overall nice track, but missing the energy from really simple elements like a hi-hat and percs! I say use that synth in intro, throughout the song, and the other synth that comes around 0:30, make it a little quieter and use as BG.
Cheers.
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