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hey Mane 
I think this is good, but i do think you can improve it.
The synth in the intro is to bright imo, can be warmer.
The bass can be stronger, it looses punch when it goes chord changing imo. Bassline is cool, not rolling .
break is really cool mate, the piano sure adds emotion. The breakbeat is cool, but i rather hear a softer kick.
Ah the melody sounds nice, though the synth sounds kinda on the background. Make it explode more next time.
Thats all mate, nice job .
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