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Hibernate:
- Like the way the track opens in a nice closed atmosphere
- Love the rythm and drive of the percussion. Some of the hats sound a bit too "plasticy" to me.
- The effect at 00:50 is really nice.. from a chorusy stereo - gathering to a point in the stereo image.. i would like to hear that one a bit more defined.
- 02:52 i would like the sine-arp just together with the bass and some very distant almost unnoticeable perc, creating the same closed atmosphere as in the beginning of the track.. then opening slowly up again at 03:13 to 03:21.
All in all a good track.. nice calm vibe! I feel some of the elements lack a bit more high end sheen to really make them pop out of the image. Although, this is hard to achieve when you also want it to be smooth. Instead of pulling off stuff at 4.5, 8 and 13.5khz and such, try running some sounds through a de-esser. Can sometimes work magic by killing off the nasty frequencies the ear doesnt like - but still keeping the clarity and definition. Also i feel the kick is 0.4 to 0.5 db too high, and that by swamping it a bit more in the mix - the atmosphere of the track will increase.
Stratosphere:
- the offbeat rimshot without attack is a bit too loud (0.9 or so), and could perhaps be panned +10 or more to the left.
- The feeling when the chorused bass enters is amazing - wasnt expecting something like that at all. Great!
- Wow.. Love the pulsating back and forth drive
- 01:55 A short pulse of short hits or something leading up to 01:56 could be cool here.. Or something to make this point a bit more defined.
- 03:52 the hat is a bit loud when it enters (0.7 or so).
- In a whole - a very nice break! excellent buildup. My toes dance when the whole thing kicks off again.
- 06:15 the atmosphere from here on is delicious. Dark and progressive. i love the feeling from this.
- 06:45 the sudden reverbed hit that opens the atmosphere again is VERY nice.. dont like the offbeat hat that comes along with it at all.. plasticy..
A very well balanced tune, everything falls into place nicely. If i was a dj at some massive underground dark progressive club - id play this track for sure! :P Same thing here about the hats as Hibernate - dont like some of em - but i guess thats more of a preference of taste. And i miss just that teeny bit of more definition in the sounds.. Im suspecting it could be something you do at mastering stage? With the eq'ing or settings in multiband compression.
All in all some excellent and well produced tracks - looking foreward to hearing more of this new direction you've taken 
- Jahala
EDIT:
Disregard the bit about general high sheen on the tracks, it has to do with something i did with my monitoring (and forgot about).. But some sounds still lack a bit of definition imho. 
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