yeah loved the melody, so i though hey why not remix it. What do you guys think ? So here it is the ideas are there please leave some thoughful feedback.

WELL, after seeing all the negative feedback about the track i didnt touch it for a while. BUT dj blighty from holland wanted it so i finished it and cleaned it up change it up a little bit .. I changed the muddines, and some part of the track to make it more dj friendly.

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Last edited by AstralNrg on Jan-28-2005 at 01:57

good job... it sounds a little muddy though... maybe its the bitrate...

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sounds extremely muddy and thats not the bitrate but the awfull eqing and mastering. Nothing special too, i dont see any bangin tech about this...its just a remake of the original.

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yeah i mastered with shity speakers hat have no subwoofer , thats why i think its so muddy. I tried to make it sorta techy and bangin ? The other version was more chill.

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synthwork is cool, elements are fine

CLEAN THIS MIX UP , you need to eq the fuck out of this one

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agree with all of the above, plus in the whole first half (before the breakdown) i feel like the offbeat bass is the wrong note, should be a whole step lower
might be because it finally resolves, but holding off a resolution for like 3 minutes just ends up sounding bad
overall nice work though

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thanks for the feedback , i knew the eq'ing is bad and stuff ,i just wanted to see if people liked this idea.

u used really nice synths, only, its been said i know, muddyness... loved the warmth of the synths and the atmosphere throughout the entire track though

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Yup, I agree with everything here. The muddiness kills those excellent synths you've got going. Remaster this and you've got a class track.

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muddy..but good job..I enjoyed this track a lot...

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+most of whats said above, about it being muddy and all. the offbeat part sounds alright to me. i like this track.

-this isn't really what i had in mind when you put "bangin tech" in the subject. also, imo it sounds too much like the original, it doesn't seem like you did anything to make it sound unique. maybe add some more elements then build the sequences different. but definitly try some parametric EQing and some compression. good luck!

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It's not bad, agree with the above about the whole thing being abit muddy. The main lead sound to distorted for me, way to much white noise.

You could do better tough I'm sure, looking forward to some new original material from you.

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