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Has a Holden (nothing returning)/Schulz kind of basswave there in the first mini-break, but that's not right, sounds like someone else, can't pin it atm!
Some of the elements after the first mini-break aren't quite clicking, and that's alright, its still working.
to add variation, maybe have a bit more fun with the kick progression, every now and then at the right timing have some fun with it, add some personality to it, change up the sequencing for a bar.
maybe you need another sub-melody if that's what's bothering you, but withhold it until the main breakdown (?)
it sounds fairly good so far. not too fond of the way the track progesses with that stronger lead at the end of the mini-break, could have used a half bar lull or build into it for a bar, kind of sudden when most of the break and track build an ambient but powerful and earthly atmosphere.
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greg corbett | schedule | party107.com tracklists
slyxster | johnson & corbett | deepwav3 |
Progressive Transmission on Party107.com every Wed @ 5pm PST (8pm EST / 1am GMT)
Pacific Coast Frequencies on Danceradioglobal.com - trance every 1st Tues @ 4pm PST (7pm EST / 12midnight GMT)
Upcoming Gigs: none scheduled
Past gigs:
Phoenix Echo Aug 8th, 2009,
Believe @ Redroom, Feb and May 2009
Gareth Emery Boat Party - Aug 8th, 2008
Phoenix Outdoor Party - Aug 16th, 2008
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