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no offence but i think you need to learn some music theory. the bassline does not sit with your melodies.
you have some nice ideas in this but they sound cheap and cheesy and a very weird structure.
percussion is basic, its just an offbeat hat, a kick and a clap/snare. listen to tracks, pick out the percussion elements in them, you'll notice that hats are layered, there are use of toms, various other percussion hits.
i cant really say much more because i find i am repeating myself.
if i sound harsh i dont mean to.
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