Mezzir - Guenevere's Song
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not 100% finished, but I feel its ready to be shown. looking for any sort of feedback basically, general opinions or specific criticisms
thanks in advance
edit: updated again. was playing around last night and added some strings to the beginning and i really really like them. still working on mastering etc
Pretty bizzare intro That synth makes me feel drunk. Portamento out the butt! I like the direction of the track dude, but it is a little out there. Mixdown needs work. What Progs are you working with?
Just keep working on it. Needs a little more layers, maybe like some different beats, or strings?
edit: or a bridge of some kind
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Feb-02-2005 02:04
mezzir
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Registered: Nov 2002
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yeah i'm adding another layer or two to the bassline and tweaking it a lot
just used fruity loops 4 and z3ta+ with the virus bank
and i'm probably gonna change up the drums a lot more
that link there's only about 2 hours worth of work so the drums are just the same looped
and strings i was thinking of also...something chinese perhaps, like in incubus - aqueous transmission right in the beginning
might just sample that actually
thanks for the feedback
thanks for the input
when i was first writing the song the harsh odd placed synth really worked for me just cause of the mood i was in when i wrote it, but i changed it around a bit and found something that still has some of the same harsh qualities but w/o being so abrasive, i definately like this version better
also a few more effects added etc, worked on the mix as well
new version edited into the original post, check it out
That synth makes me feel drunk. Portamento out the butt! I like the direction of the track dude, but it is a little out there. Mixdown needs work. What Progs are you working with?
