hey ,
heres a short clip of an uplifting trancer im working on.

the track has long break with nice lush strings with a choir leading up to a 1999 style crescendo.
please check it out and tell me what you think
( i welcome all comments good and bad)

and please tell me what you think of the melodies

project name:Stimula
track name:dust
length : 2:48 demo cut
Bitrate : 192kb

download link -
http://www.arach.net.au/~iwright/stimula-demo.mp3

Hey Stimula - love the breakdown with those almost orchestral strings

Love the choral pads too, maybe fatten up the 'orchestral strings' a bit - but this definitely has a 1999 feel to it with those synths that come in.
If you work on fattening up the synths then this will be great.

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here's fast comment from me

> nice melodies in this one
> your sounds are a bit thin indeed as RickyM said, i suggest you should work on taking off this software feel from them.

with some more workon the sounds this should be very nice

static blue

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ta thanks for the feed back
It sounded fine on my cheap head phones,
Guess that explains a lot.

can you tell me more about the problems with the synths?

any thing about the track i should know ?

Last edited by stimula on Feb-03-2005 at 12:46

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Originally posted by stimula ta thanks for the feed back It sounded fine on my cheap head phones, Guess that explains a lot. can you tell me more about the problems with the synths? is it lack of mid range ?

it's not only a lack of midrange, if you add some midrange on a "cheap - sounding" synth it will just sound dull and muddy and even more cheap.

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thats odd because most of the sounds came from a roland jp-8080,

after a second listen on monitors, the synth that needs the most work (IMO) is the high saw playing in the beginning (so the main synth aswell).

sorry, ive exagerated a bit in my first post and those deep growling fx's are nice.

maybe you could work a bit more on the transitions aswell

peace
static blue

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What is wrong with the synth ?
envelope adsr ?
filter?
FX?

?

as i said, i think it's too thin. If it comes from the JP i'm sure you can make it sound better. Maybe youve HP-filtered it too much aswell.

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