Hey Seneca,

I'm always up for some prog! I'll download this when I get home from work tonight, and post a review at that time.

Trevor

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OK,

this has a great fun funky vibe to it.
I'm getting a bit of distortion on the kick though...
I like the vocal sample.
Great percs after the break!

Great tune over all.. looking forward to hearing more,
Trevor

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hey thanks for listening and providing some input.

The kick is an electro sample and I'm actually thinking of changing it to a less distorted kind.

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yes nice bass! grovy

However the kick i really band.

the perc sound a bit dry, whole mix is, like there is no EQ used or something, i don't know how to explain it.

vocal is cool

intro needs more sfx sounds or variation.

that raw acid sounds nice, but once again i find it a bit dry or something.

Tune needs some more variation, and maybe some better mixing, definitely needs a better kick.

thats all

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Originally posted by Massive84 yes nice bass! grovy However the kick i really band. the perc sound a bit dry, whole mix is, like there is no EQ used or something, i don't know how to explain it. vocal is cool intro needs more sfx sounds or variation. that raw acid sounds nice, but once again i find it a bit dry or something. Tune needs some more variation, and maybe some better mixing, definitely needs a better kick. thats all

thanks for your input... I have since revised the track. Looks like it will be finished next week... i have no time. Please give it another shot though.

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listening:

it starts out very messy and not as smooth as I might enjoy.. good bass sound, the idea sounds good.. but i dont like the hats.. they seem to "obvious" and not very subtle.. still it changes after about 1:00 which is good.. very good vocals.. the track is getting better from every bar after 1:00.. i do like the kick.. and the bass very much..

really like this very much.. but i need to change the intro /first minute of the track.. loving the bass and kick

good work

8/10

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- like said, its a bit rough at first
- that syncopated tom you should perhaps change to a more unique and softer sounding perc like a conga
- the groove, one it gets going, is pretty cool, but i wanted to hear a snare in there
- the break at 2:30 needs a pad or strings, at least very subtle ones
- add slight reeverb to some of your percs and play with stereo modulation
- overall the track seems to build toward something, but never gets there, i think strings and pads could help with that
- bassline sounds awesome on a good nice

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