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Need some feedback, pleeease!


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Thanx!

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Last edited by moolow on Feb-14-2005 at 09:48

Hey there!

I think this is beginning to sound pretty nice. I'm not too fond of the chord progression, but the sounds are quite fine I think. Bassline, kick and percussion are good (maybe the percs are just a tiny bit too loud).

I do think the song needs more structure to it, to make it sound more pleasable to the ear.

Hope this helps a little

Bye,
Wim

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Thanx for the advices Wim!
I must say I'm really glad that u like the percussions! ..that's my weakness.

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moolow!

i'm listening right now.

this has a really nice happy feel. i especially like the bass and chords composition (the instruments sound really good too)

spacy fx are good and i can't fault the percs (i might change the open hi hat, but that is just a little picky thing)

good to hear new music from you.

later,
-rob

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Thanx Rob!
I'm glad u like it ..so far.
Maybe I'll re-make it later.

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Love this. Sounds are crisp and clear. Ah, maybe that chord progression needs work. Percussion is sweet though.

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nice work. i think the kick is a bit un-trancey . but maybe that's the point. i mean, there's no real oomph in it .

but the chords are quite nice and percussions are good. i would probably lower the volume on those rim-shots percs (or whatever it is) just a bit .

good luck with it

- imo percussion is a bit too technic, it doesnt seem to flow along with the beat
- overall, the track seems empty and could use more strings, pads
- the bass is too common, you should try experimenting
- i actually like the chord progression, very chill

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really nice melody, structure and bass is lacking somewhat...

with a bit of direction this could be turned into something really good

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Thanx for the feedback!!


I will put my energy in the chords JoeyEnv (and the kick Andreas )

Am going to make a different buildup (eulerfx & Luke Terry)

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Last edited by moolow on Feb-15-2005 at 14:12

The tune has a nice feel to it but you need to work on the kick. It's much to weak and needs to be replaced by something much stompier.

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Hmm, it seems a bit plain despite the main synth being so lively. I don't think theres enough to it for my liking, maybe one more lead synth that just draws interest back now and again.

Overall tho i agree with a little work this could be a great track.