Please let me know what you think of this so far... am I onto something or should I trash this? Thanks!

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Looking forward to some honest feedback. Thanks again!

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sounds very basic but would do for hard trance i guess
what prog u use?

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definitiveley you are onto something,nice ideas,but i really dont like the mastering ;()


http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...threadid=244824

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hey!wait,sorry,.mastering is not so bad,my headphones was failling :P

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LOL! I know the mastering could use a lot of work -- even if you have great headphones... but then I just started this last night, so hopefully it'll just get better.

I wrote this in FL Studio with Sytrus, FM7, Absynth, Albino, and then the usual samplers for the drums. I hope to have an update for you real soon.... Thanks again for listening =)

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I agree with MegaMan here... this would be better off hard trance

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A different kick would make the track much better

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Originally posted by IKKI-ZUVK A different kick would make the track much better

Any ideas on the kick? Know of any good places to get kick samples? This one is using some generic TS808 kick that I found off the web.

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get a yoji biomehanika sounding kick... this sounds liek a hard trance melody... so it would be better off with hard trance instruments

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Hey,
Not bad at all,mmm kinda basic like someone else said but you just made it yesterday so prolly adding more synths and ideas could be a really nice tune .
Kopi =o.

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Originally posted by kopi_luwak Hey, Not bad at all,mmm kinda basic like someone else said but you just made it yesterday so prolly adding more synths and ideas could be a really nice tune . Kopi =o.

Thanks =) I've been working on this tune a lot today and have added a bit here and there. I just updated the MP3, so be sure to redownload it. I haven't tweaked the kick drum yet, but I'll focus on that for my next update. Thanks for the feedback, and please let me know what you think of the update =)

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ah sounds better... even tho it's not hard trance... it's now more techno trance... I'd go all out on this one... put techno sounds, weird whistles and crap..put a big siren rhythm or something... some robot female voice too "the system is down" (search google for the TTS demo) heh :P an abrupt stop on the buildup... anything to make this interesting!

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