*As I listen*
-I like the openening percussion sequence.
-Good use of a white noise transition, still veryy good percussion.
-I'd bring the level of the ride cymbal down a little bit
-I like the panned hats and that back ground bass melody thing
-I like the transition into the breakdown and the buildup in the breakdown a lot. The synth in the breakdown is pretty bad ass. has a lot of energy. As the lead continues to play it is still good but I think you need a bit more backing, like another melody in the back to compliment it.
-I like the strings pad and I didn't expect it but I still can't decide whether or not it fits.
-The song really sounds good when you bring everything back in. I think you should compress your kick to give it some more character and boost though after listening to everything playing at once. overall really good track m8 4/5 -- Ryan

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