hi, here is an incomplete track im working on. tell us what you think.

also a remix of push - the legacy that i started when i was bored.

(right click save target as...)
http://www.eng.nene.ac.uk/~bf02riot/new.mp3

http://www.eng.nene.ac.uk/~bf02riot/legacy.mp3

any comments welcome
cheers

Hey
Listening First Track ...... The intro is well done, but after becomes extremely long and bored imo, lacks of power between each one of the transitions so all feel kinda da same,and the drums barely variate.
I like the breakdown is tight .
In overall, the main idea is great, I just would work a more the buildup, about the mastering, I am using Pc speakers so I cannot judge but I liked keep it up mate .
Kopi =o.

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I liked the overall melody.. It's deep. It doesn't really do much, but you said it wasn't finished. You just need to take it to that next level..

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Yeah I like the melody, Chill track. Sounds a bit pvd'ish.. But thats not a bad thing. Digging this track chillin me out.

good work

Jay

cheers for the comments

apart from stealing percs from matt darey and the obscene amount of treble the tune has got a lot of potential, i like the melody a lot.

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1st one : Very good track, this is what i like, dreamy melodies. great synths and a good drive. I think the variation is good in this one, it doesn't need that much i think, it keeps interesting imo. Good job!

second one : This is nice but this is really too repetitive and it really gets dull very soon. Make it more interesting, it really needs some extra work.

Only listened to the 1st one...

I liked it the breakdown. Fantastic! I loved it. You need to work on the build-ups and mastering (hihats too loud, when the bass/kick starts after the break your main melody instruments need a pinch of more volume).

Overall , great work. It should be released one day!

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