Hi here,

This is my newest i'm working on. It's a rough mix of 'Dawn of Time'. I think it sounds really nice, but i think it needs some work. Tell me what you think about it, and maybe you have some tips to make it better. Tomorrow i will work on it again, so any input now would be great. -Romi

update : new version is now up!

Link to track : http://www.sitesled.com/members/rom...20of%20Time.MP3

Last edited by Romi on Mar-11-2005 at 17:25

I love the ambience
good breakdown
if I were making it, I'd make the part after the long breakdown have a little more energy, so the song kinda takes you somewhere farther than where you were in the beginning of the song.

keep up the good work!

Thanks AudioGuru, i will use your input tomorrow, when i work on it further.

fantastic break man.but i think the kick comes in too aprupt.i would make a raise before the kick comes in, so there is more power and climax in it.can become a top notch track i think.

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Thanks 1mason11, i will keep that in mind. (i will pm you later about the mp3 for my other track Technological Mind). I'm glad you liked this one so far.

Sounds really good, beautiful stuff really!
I found the noiseiness of the synths a little irritating, could just be my sensitive ears
Everything else is sweet, really nice ambience and mood. Good shit, sherlock!

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Indeed, the noise in the lead synth is a bit irritating ( EQ?? ). Make it more predictable when the kick comes at break with a swoosh/sweep or drum roll. Nice work m8.

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Thanks for the tips guys. I'm gonna work on it later today and i will keep your suggestions in mind. The overall mix could indeed be a bit better. Thanks again

Ok, i've worked on it some more and i am now quite happy with it. Tell me what you think. Same link btw.

Last edited by Romi on Mar-11-2005 at 15:13

Wow. Yes mate, keep producing tracks and check your email . Awesome tune and I mean tune not song if you know the difference :P.

Cheers,
Zac

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You could use some more sound effects in the intro. Once 0:25 rolls around, you can leave them, but it would be nice to have some ambience there in the beginning.

Awesome bassline. Very groovy.

The kick fill before 4:00 is throwing me off. Dunno if that was intentional or not.

In general, a very chilled track. Good for some easy listening.