Nice percs in the intro, I like them.
Here comes the kick..try to compress it, it's kinda weird with that bass. I'd defenetly compress it.
There's a point where I think the bass clashes with the kick, try to fix that.
Cool fx and synths. Bass is good. Didn't like that snare. Very nice synths around 1:35
You should make the kick louder.
The break is nice, beautiful strings, but make them louder and try maybe to add more bass there.
Again very nice synth work you did.
I didn't really liked the main melody.
Nice fx in the end.
Hmm..overall good work, keep it up

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very easy intro i dont lik it starts songs is to simple
wery wired sounds buth synth is nice
generaly song is not bad but strange =o]

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Originally posted by ronk Nice percs in the intro, I like them. Here comes the kick..try to compress it, it's kinda weird with that bass. I'd defenetly compress it. There's a point where I think the bass clashes with the kick, try to fix that. Cool fx and synths. Bass is good. Didn't like that snare. Very nice synths around 1:35 You should make the kick louder. The break is nice, beautiful strings, but make them louder and try maybe to add more bass there. Again very nice synth work you did. I didn't really liked the main melody. Nice fx in the end. Hmm..overall good work, keep it up

Thanks for the tips, unfortunately, I released this track before my PC crashed and lost every file in it, incluiding my projects.
But I'm happy it is a good work.

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