Hey!

Me and Syntagma sat down again to create a new track

and here it is!

download:
http://www.whiteroachproductions.nl...G_-_Hold_On.mp3

Ok the guitar is not that properly tuned...eh...if it is too annoying we'll change it. We enjoy comments!

greets PJ

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love the fx on the percussion, almost a soft tribal feel. i don't think your transitions into your pads/strings is very well done, it almost sounds out of key to me.

the 1st breakdown is cool, some good automation with added bassline on the last part in the bar makes it sound full. the guitar is def. out of tune lol, i think less effects on it would be better. Infact, lets get rid of this specific guitar and get rid of the automation. Maybe put in some more pads.

i dunno overall, from a DJ's perspective the song doesn't go anywhere... infact the 1st build was more prolific than the 2nd.

from a producers ear the song has some cool ideas but i still dont think you guys had a direction for the song.

Ok, well I really am liking the idea of this song. Several things that can be changed is maybe a thicker bassline, a little stronger lead, maybe not so much chorusing on the girl, instead, more reverb. I'd really be interested in helping to make this track a little more trancey. If you are interested in having me help you or want to talk busniess (I'd like to do both actually lol), drop me a line at [email protected].

Cheers,
Zac

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yes a little work on the bassline could be good , but i like your song, and i think i will play it on my next ETN show ^^

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omg new syntagma (vs pjotr g!!)

bout time John.

dling

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hehe hold the downloads, a revised version is coming up

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quote:

Originally posted by DjCommisad omg new syntagma (vs pjotr g!!) bout time John.

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fuckin awesome

new version, with fixed guitar, and somewhat better bass

http://www.whiteroachproductions.nl..._Hold_On_v2.mp3

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Still loving it dude . Keep it up.

Cheers,
Zac

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DarkSword - Turn On
DarkSword - Hell Bound
DarkSword - Fresh
DarkSword - Styled
DarkSword - Shadowed Sun
DarkSword - Turning Forward
DarkSword - ALLFRUIT
Pacific Mint vs DarkSword - Climax Zone 2005
SoundClick Page

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quote:

Originally posted by IDarkISwordI Still loving it dude

dudes

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Theres been a few good prog tracks on this site lately. I think I'm slowly starting to loose my blind, ignorant hatred for progressive trance

Starts off pretty slowly, almost housey. Vocals are nice.

The melody you weave in at 2.01 is very nice. Beautiful stuff indeed.

Guitar is cool too... reminds me of the diablo II soundtrack for some reason...

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