Hi there,

The final version is finished now, and it can be found using the link below. Thanks for all the input. New comments are welcome.

The complete version:
http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=514619&T=1594

-Ron

Last edited by Romi on Mar-23-2005 at 21:44

Hey. You are seriously an awesome producer. Keep it up. Might lessen the kick frequencies around the 1Khz mark and put more on the 250 mark. Should add a little more power to the track.

Cheers,
Zac

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what a sweet melody ron.

really summerish and relaxing.

Production wise you can improve it by much, mixing still isn't 100%.

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hey ron,

what a sweet melody in this one, love the style of it,

however you should still tweak the track a bit more in my opinion,

but this one turning out really good,

keep making cool tunez,

cheers,

Peter

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Thanx for the quick replies so far. I'm working on this one at this moment so your input is very usefull.

-Ron

Interresting to listen to this clip! Change the synth coming in at 00.21 though... It is not as dreamy as it should be! Also, make the track warmer and more powerful by giving it more low frequenzies I like this one alot!!!

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Thanks for the replies so far. An updated and longer demoversion is available now here:

http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=514619&T=1594

A complete version is available now.

http://www.acidplanet.com/Artist.asp?PID=514619&T=2155

Comments are welcome.

I think all ur sounds and stuff is to static and clean imo....not dirty enough i think. Your bassline is nice, but it could be way nicer by making it rougher. Your percussion is quite static i think you could improve that. Your synths and sounds are very nice, that electric guitar is awesome !!!, excellent dreamy feeling. Your accords and chords are very nice as well. Those guitars are really good !, awesome atmosphere. Still good use better mixing, pads and synths lack a little high frequencie and percussion gets pushed back when it all kicks in. Apart from this its a really nice dreamy track, good production quality.

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hey Romi,

please check your PM's!

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Check yours Mycron

it's your turn now, again Ron!

please, check your PM's!

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