Krimes - Controlled

Hey guys,

This is a track ive been working on recently called Controlled with it having a change in artist title since the last sample i placed here. Its a track i've tried to add different genre elements in with some slight acid sounds as well as techy influences along with of course the breakbeat. The sound of guitar also features in the track.

Just looking for some opinions really on what I can improve with the track and make it the complete article. Would be very appreciated.

Thanks

Length: 6:48
Size: 9.34MB
Bitrate: 192k

I think this could use some more warmth, that means sub frequencies. The bass area is quite empty in my opinion. The beat is solid.
You should work on your FXes and stabs, that hi stab in the end doesnt sound that good.
I'd make this thing a bit fuller, work a bit on the sounds (especially by applying some FX on them)

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Hey bro,
Listening ... Intro, Drums are very cool, the only thing I dont liked was the clap, sounds too sample, try adding some Fx, above all more reverb/Reflection, also put a bit down the Highs on your Drums . Pad, Voice are fine for the intro, I would play with the Reverb with the Voice Sample to give more variation imo. Hahaha, nice guitar, FL slayer? :P.
In overall, is a very good work, I liked the Drums alot, but I woudl work more with them, right now it does sounds too sequenced, also try to Balance better each sound, and put a bit down ur highs, other than that you have very good ideas here, keep it up .
Kopi =o.

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Thanks for the comments guys, appreciate it!

Will work on those points and come back and post an improved effort

Oh and FL Slayer indeed, it was there so thought I may as well give it a try