Hi guys,

Let me know what u think about this track i made.
Ive fixed a few things that some of you guys picked up on earlier.

Slipstream - Slipstream

As usual feed back is always welcome

Cheers.

http://www.atomiced.com/Slipstream%...al%20mix).mp3?1

Last edited by 0_SlipStream_0 on Jun-13-2005 at 11:14

Hello, just checked out your track. Nice smooth start and good hihats. It has quite a progressive feel which isn't really my thing, but it sounds good all the same.

I think the mastering could do with an upper midrange boost. It feels a bit flat at the moment. A harmonic exciter could do some good things here.

Overall its a fairly mellow track and I could imagine listening to it after a hard night out or something. Mixing and synth programming is generally pretty good, just a bit too mellow for my tastes.

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Nice chill out track!
Very good production I think.All instruments and drum kits sound crisp and crystal.
I like also the happy feeling of the track.It gives me positive images.
I enjoy it !

My respect

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psy tunes in the mix "psyunite"

Definately love the emotion in this one. I think I'll be keeping it.

Cheers guys.
I appreciate your comments. Glad you liked it.

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Originally posted by 0_SlipStream_0 Hi guys, Let me know what u think about this track i made. Ive fixed a few things that some of you guys picked up on earlier. Slipstream - Slipstream As usual feed back is always welcome Cheers.

heya mate!

Nice bass drum. The hihat over it doesn't suit.
The clap is too harsh.
the track could do with a deeper bass!

I like those pads. A higher layer could be added.

good build up.

5.08 the main synth frequencies are harsh. Maybe you could also add a higher layer to the leads. The sound field is dominated by mids.

Great effort on this one Slipstream. Alot of work has gone into it. Id love to hear the final product after a bit of mastering & tweeking.

Xeno.

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nice track man, cool atosphere and i like the bass fx in the intro
I think the clap is okay, just the hihat on the kick is not doing this track much good.

hey!

nice buildup in the track...good use of bg-fx in it! maybe some sounds could be a bit louder in the mids...
lovely break...
really nice melody! reminds me of a thomas datt production!

overall a good production! definately worth listening!
-> moved to music folder!

// Lars

Nice hook lead, I like the chilled out atmospheric feel. Reminds me of watching clouds, for some reason trance reminds me of clouds. Very nice work, Slip Stream.
-Alex

Thanks again for the feed back.
Im currently working on the mastering issues atm.
Will post an update shortly.

Not a really big fan of the hat you placed on the kick, the kick itself is a bit to ploppy as well, but its a pretty strong one so its ok. Percussion sounds a bit thin and basic. Your bassline is really strong but those synths are ugly, sound really thin and just dont have a nice sound. The pad that comes up now as a pretty nice sound but the whole eq-ing is completely out of balance, i would really look at that. Another synth comes in now, also not a very nice sound, sounds like reason synth work? you are using Reason? The whole productuion has this reason sound.
Intro is getting very boring now, isnt really building and i miss variation in the drums patterns (work on that, bring more life in it, add some extra panning stuff, variate in the patterns every now and then ).
Break now, very chilled, strings sound a bit old skool but they do have certain nice atmosphere. I would certainly add more elements in the break, a low pad, a nice panning FX pad or whatever, a guitar a piano. Main synth now, feel good melody, melody is ok . Main synth sounds like a malstrom saw Im pretty sure this is made in reason now . I really think you need to work on your sounds because they are all a bit blurry and thin and not very well eq-ed. The song and melody it self do have potential.

Keep up the work

Stijn

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