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Stiggy
tranceaddict
Registered: Jun 2005
Location: Philadelphia
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Thought you had some real nice elements. Mastering sounded fine to me in my head phones. I thought your kick drum needed some more punch to it, and you should make a sweet driving bassline to help move it along. Your low end needed some help that's all. Make those adjustments and you a have a killer club tune.
Overall a good job, pleasing to my ears...
Stiggy
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Jun-30-2005 02:56
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DJ Kenosis
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Sep 2004
Location: Washington DC
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You're right that this is very chilled in feeling. I haven't heard your previous work, so I can't really comment on that.
Pro - The mastering is good (better than my track, that's for sure). Each element is very distinct and nothing really gets muddied up too much. The vocals were very nice as well. The pianos were a nice touch.
Cons - Really don't like the melody at the beginning. There's something very 'preset-y' or off about the sound. It almost sounds too 'brassy'. Maybe use a different waveform to start with. The melody line itself is ok, so if you're very enthused about that that wouldn't need changing. This is only a 3:30 minute sample, so perhaps the track develops more later, but as far as I can see it's really not going anywhere, and you need to make it develop or add some twist to it within the timeframe given in your sample to keep people's attention.
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Jun-30-2005 03:51
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rqpeyruxvg
Supreme tranceaddict

Registered: Dec 2002
Location: Earth
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Returnin The favour...
Hi MP, Returnin the favour.
Intro, sounds kina rocky, i like the pad chords, nice variation. piano is fine, vocals are used good. synth is melodic and plucky, not too much for the intro, nice.
1:28, Nice kick, masterin sounds fine, the synth could be phatter here, it sounds like to much attack on that but at the same time, simple is good.
Percussion is fine, could have a few more elements here and there to fill up gaps and a sort of background noise to keep the track flowing too just to get rid of the tracks emptyness. Apart from that, nice stuff mate, keep it up.
Terry.
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Jun-30-2005 16:02
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