http://albanyddr.pxtek.com/prog11.mp3

320kbps

I worked this up in a few hours or so. Not too bad, not too good.

I need a lot of comments as i'm trying to learn a bunch of things on how to make the quality better throughout the song.

hey!

i like what you've done...
nice use of percs...maybe you could add some more...low and mid tombs would sound cool, imo!
it's cool that you've edited the mainlead a bit...
some more bg-fx would give this track more atmosphere...
some pads or smth like this would make the sound fuller...

would be great to hear a full version of your remix!

// Lars

ps: if you want to, you can check out my remix of clear blue, just have a look at my sig!

Thanks for the reply

Me and my buddy decided to start collab on this since I can learn a ton of things from him. It'll be a whole new song too.

But it's not looking too good now so I might just go back over to Clear Blue

I don't know what to do with toms.

Last edited by Allen&Bream on Jun-26-2005 at 19:20

Nice Remix, I like it. Pity that there are no vocals and that it's so short...

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Review while listening:


- Kick is little "hollow"
- Like the percussion
- The melody has TOO much reverb I think

Sometimes i hear crackles (in your kick i think).
After the break the you cannot hear the kick very well.
Take a look at the mixdown/mastering. It's not so "clear blue"

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Originally posted by DjMorpheus Take a look at the mixdown/mastering. It's not so "clear blue"

Nice one

Was made in fruity...Don't know what to master with

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That lead reminds me something!
Did you use the Vstation patch I posted in the production forum ?

hate to say but i think you need to listen to the original one more time to tweak the melody because it isnt right

It's a remix.

i know but to at least have the correct melody in ther eat some point...and then vary it....would be good.....only a suggestion