A pdated version i avaible. And please I want some of your opinions!

Listening now.

Theres not that much happening in the beginning.
also the bassline youre using sounds a little uncomplicated, I'd put some more work on those bassline to make them stand out more.

Nice strings you're using. (do I detect some metallic whine on them?)

I'd look more into making a better buildup in the intro, add more detail and stuff like that.

You've got a nice melody at 3:20. However it progresses for a long time where nothing happens to develop the track.

Well, these are some issues I would look at.

Good work so far m8!

Hope this helps

/Fred

The hum in the bass line is a bit annoying. It sort of detracts from the bass's punch.

The development of the track between 1:58 and 2:43 seems a bit slow maybe add another percussive element to bring the energy up a bit more.

In general, your development moves very slowly, even for me. You want to try going for variation every eight bars at least. It doesn't need to be much, but it should be enough to make a difference.

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