I've remastered brainchild-beginning to sound better. I've thrown out all software synths and replaced with hardware. I think its a better master too, and the drums have been replaced.

Flow in the track in general has been more streamlined.

Here it is:
http://www.born.se/music/E-mortal-Feel.mp3


Enjoy!

/Fred

Yes, it sounds much better now. The drums has get a lift from the previous version. But still I think that you should work more on the bass(line). And still the leadsynths sound "old" and noobish...
Sure, they can sound old, but get rid of that noobish sound.
I really love Vicky's voice
//Alexander

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Thanks for the feedback Alex

I dunno.. been working so much on this track now hehe.

I think I'll go with that synthline (I did tone it down alot to make it more level with the track).

I think I'm going to leave the bassline as it is now, might do something about it in the future.

But right now I'm sick and tired of tweaking this track

Glad you liked it!

nice tune, works alot better now. It sounds alot tighter. Dont worry about most of these miserable ******s - ive seen tracks posted here that make it for general realese, end up being played by major DJs and still thier moaning about a FX not being quite right - they never judge a tune on musicality.


your tune has a unique feel to it which is important, production is good also - good shit

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Nice one keep it up

this sounds interesting

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Hehe, is that good or bad?

I'm going to look into changing the kick today to get that subby gritty thump sound that this mix is missing right now