Although it's not my style, here's my feedback:

- Kick is little hollow, it need more punch
- Clap has to much reverb in my opinion
- Hihat's are good
- Like the melody and chords in the first break


Think that the idea is good (the melody, chords etc) but you can make more out of it.

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DownForce

Hi,

I think this song sounds too dry in a way. Percussion's also a bit standard. Nice SFX, though.
Same with the synths, they could be a lot wetter. Some don't even sound very cool, like the brass sound in the second breakdown.
Mixing is very good at the moment, so you HAVE done this more often indeed

-weBs

Thank you both for your feedback, I appreciate it!

We might have different opinions on what sounds good and not and the fact that we do music differently; I will give this some real thought, thank you!

// Nick

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