Well hi friends of TA im new here have posted a few replays and made a thred ,Thou im new here i hope to be able to give ass much feedback as i can. Now I would love your Feedback on my latest track
And is this one whort sending to some company?

Feedback appriciated

(Chillout/downtempo)

Track @ http://www.dance-industries.com/view_artist.php?ID=2635&track=10268

Sry heres the right link =)

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Last edited by mavve on Jul-19-2005 at 03:46

I don't know about the track, but I made it to a 404 error by clicking that link.

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hehehe tnx for telling me that . Its a new link now

i have uppdated but to be secure here it is again

http://www.dance-industries.com/vie...635&track=10268

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Rain at the begining feels unnatural. I can notice it looping, and then stopping too suddenly. Try overlapping several loops, some faster, some slower, and when you bring it down, make it fade away sloooooooowwlllyyyy. Pads are nice. Percussions are pretty good too. That piano thing sounds ok but too chaotic - feels like it's playing random notes at times. I like that heavier beat that comes in about halway through.

Pretty chilled track, It's ok.

tnx for the replys i would need some more feedback =)

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