i'll post the updated version soon, but please still give feedback.

peace

reviewing while listening:

pretty good start, interesting...sounds abit to blended/meshed, beat is good, pumping and good drive in the track.

is that a square bass? the snare needs reverb in the break..too flat.
the pads are good, creating a nice atmoshphere...that deep bassthump is too "loud", my bassbox almost cracked.

the main lead melody is good, but drowns into all the other sounds..I think making each sound more distinct in some way may "open up" this track.

in the break at 02.59 the pads "clip" when the start..the sample you use there needs to have a smoother fade and better quality, cuze Im hearing a hissing sound, but that could be the release on it?

anyways, its a pretty good track, and with some work Im sure it could get better and it shows promise.

take care,

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thanx for the feedback.

yeah i forgot that i bounced the pads to wav so that it wouldn't drain cpu.

i'll look into your suggestions and maybe post an update.

but im kinda thinking of scraping this track, i know it sounds stupid but once ive put a track together it seems hard to touch up, it would work better if i just started again. not sure yet tho.

cheers for your feedback once again.
more feedback is welcome.

Alright I'm listening to this.

I like the hook.
I like the neatly placed sounds. Very Strategical.
That kick sounds really nice.
The Progression is great, the way it starts out full powered, comes to break and then build-up again.

This is a very nice Rave track.
I like the little hints of melody note change around 2:59.
Excellent string usage!
Hmmm, the breakbeat sounds a little of sync there.
I like the tension builder, sounds very nice. Quite uplifting.
Sounds like the last remainder of the full fledged melody you need a clap or something to give it that Trance element. Good mixing, it sounds very clean. Just a tought though, the clap would be quite a treat.

This is really good.
It's earned a spot on my mp3 player.

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