Hey guys,

I feel i've got some good elements together for my new track with some good scope for me to progress the rest of my track. Though I would appreciate some advice on my intro so i can enable myself to build my track better after the intro section.

Would love some advice or what needs tweaking, putting in or taking out please. Link below:

Krimes - Facing Reality (Intro Sample)

Thanks

I don't like to bump but theres been a few downloads and would just love one opinion on my intro to give me some confidence to continue with the track.

Thanks

Quite creative, although not creative enough for that style, as thick as it may seem it still lacks interest in the long run. Throwing a few more subtle fx every now and then might help.

I can't really comment on the intro as a whole because I don't know whats coming next. But i'm sure someone who likes this type of music more than I do can give better feedback.

I do think that the percussion could do with a little work, I'm not a fan of that clicky noise. I think you could of been a bit more creative than just click click click kick. Just my opinion, and like I said I'd have to hear the full track to comment on the intro as a whole.

Hey, really appreciate you taking a listen and theres some very useful stuff there for me to work with, thanks