The buildup could be improved some, feels a tad too long, but seriously, the melody in this one is totally devine! I utterly loved everything after the break. Very sweet and lovely. Sounds fresh with the electric guitar!

Also on a production note, you could crank up the higher frequencies a lot to make it sound sharper. If you want I could throw it at my powercore card mastering plug to fix it for you

Really good work with this one!

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Thanks for the reply Drik. Remember, the mp3 is only 96k, the wav sounds a lot cleaner .

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The electric guitar is indeed a nice touch. Extremely subtle fromt he beginning and moving things wonderfully.

Listened on headphones:
The guitar noises are heavenly. The pads themselves are fantastic, and I have nothing to say about the higher freqs - I prefer this to be squeaky clean .

Dreamy and melodic... uber relaxing, yet somewhat danceable...

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Thx Four_On_Four-er, i'm happy you liked this one .

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already posted my comments for this one.. i listen to it again now.. great work!

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very well produced and some lovely sounds. im not a great fan of the guitar. bass and everything else is spot on.

the guitar just doesnt have the same sophistication of the rest of the track. melody is nice.

i recon a distorted 'rock' guitar would work better, add a double delay to it to keep it sounding dreamy.

thats all id change.

rich

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Hi Romi

nice crisp sounding percs, but maybe fractioanlly overpowering and could sit back a touch, nice funky yet trancey bass line. Nice use of FXs

Nice break, good guitar noise. Very Dreamy melody. Melody is good but not too memorable though.

Sounds well produced.


good work

Thanks again for the comments guys, really apreciate them .

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just heard this track, and really loved it. i'm wondering if i could get a high quality version to use in my next set?

pm me or aim me at mptmtiaaf

thanks.. =D

Well, of course you can trancinchink . Check out your pm. I've recently improved this one btw with some more effects and better bass.
I will send you that one of course .

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Last edited by Romi on Sep-16-2005 at 17:30

As always Romi again a splendid track with a lovely build up, that guitar sound is great. Build up is nice.

Break as always very good, dreamy. I do have to say all your leads sound alike. a faster lead in a track would be nice for a change YOur notation is mostly the same. But still the melody is lovely and I just like the overall atmosphere in your tracks.

The mastering is not as good ad Dream Machine. The sound is a bit muffled here and there. A bit more clarity would do this track a lot of extra good. Dreamy tracks need to be clear and crisp

Overall great track mate!