Here;s something I made a month ago or so.. I thought I'd post it here..
I think its rather good, but see for yourself

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6:27
160 kb/s
Full track
Fruity & Acid

Life is good

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I like the track I just think that you can make the background saw a little louder. I can't hear it well enough in the track and I think it might give the track a little more depth to it. The crash cymbal could use a little more reverb i think add some more effects to it. I'm still listening to the track, but I like it so far good job

Hey mate, nice track. Really likeing the range of style you seem to be able to produce in.

The gated saw is a bit much. You should try lessening the effect somehow, it kinda destroys the flow of the track.

The lead at 0.54 is sounding a bit generic especially when you open the filter on it fully. I like how smooth it sounds, but its lacking something.

The break is very nice. Pads are very smooth and atmospheric. When it kicks back in, it all sounds much better than the intro. Definately suit the name velvet jet very well. Nice work on this one dude

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thanks everyone for your kind replies , the advices are very usefull! sorry to trespond so late.. due to school and other stuff..
but hey, better late thn never Ill continue this track after the the remix competition..

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Hi man,
I am not good at Trance so my feedback is not very helpful .
The only thing I cans ay is that I like it very much, u always improve urself, and that's good because I know some peep that never try to do new things and get stuck with the same monotone style or sort of and u always try new stuff in ur tracks .
Keep it up man .
Kopi =o.

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