hey guys this will be my 3rd submission to your opinions:
the recently finished and still occasionally edited "hi-c"

now im not a pro but id love your constructive criticm.

prog: FLstudio 5

instruments:
drum set
FM7
Pro-53
Sytrus
TS-404

as for the genre i'd guess at psy/experimental trance? lol

LINK HERE FOR HI-C

(also, mind you its a bit muddied down by purevolume so yes... i know )


thanks a lot in advance!

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Hello.

Some things you may want to look into in your future tracks:

- Kick needs more dynamics so it pumps; EQ it less, but make the EQ that you do use count. It sounds like a low rumble.

- The main synth instrument (the one that's acidy) sounds a little cheap, try adding some FX to it.

- The melody line creates a lot of dissonance which really puts the listener on edge. Also, perhaps it would be good to add another synth to thicken it if you like.

Things I noticed that you did well:

- Arrangement
- Good creativity in the intro
- Fills and leads

Good luck and thanks for sharing.

thanks! ill keep those tips in mind

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Ok.Some nice ideas here but mastering needs a lot of work.For ex at somepoints kick almost dissapear!Synth is too loud.Solo of the synth is too much for me and generally I have the image of an oldschool track that sometimes is good and sometimes bad.You said that is experimental but is not psy.Not my cup of tea anyway.

PS:Change please your location cause mine could be your moms bed!!! hahaha

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psy tunes in the mix "psyunite"