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Hey Axo,
commenting as I listen...
that detuned saw in the beginning is wicked, I really like its sound.
The bassline is quite fat and very rolling, I have to say it sounds pro, but I think you could improve it with some very short breaks or stops at some point... maybe through a triggered gate?
The kick sound is good, maybe it could be softened a bit, your decision 
Darksword pointed out one thing quite well: You do not have enough drive in your track. There needs to be a certain amount of harshness through upper frequencies. I also think you need more percussive elements in the upper frequencies, or maybe percussive synths adding more drive.
The tune is funky, but not driving, maybe you can give it both abilities.
4:10 is a great change, I love it. It takes me by surprise everytime I hear it. The part is very funky. Very good synth design and arrangement here. IMO the best part of the song.
The lead synth sounds very playful and "freestyle-ish", dunno how to say this, but it works really like a solo instrument... that is absolutely awesome. It's a characteristic of most Trance that the leads sounds quite "looped", most of my tunes do, too. But this lead sounds much more natural and elaborate and fits perfectly. In the end it gets a little more repetitive, though. If you ask me, you should consider some kind of "guitar solo".
Great track, I love its funkiness. You improved a lot in terms of sound and mastering and you can hear it at every point. Improve the issue with the upper frequencies, and you got a dancefloor killer, seriously 
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