I made this awhile back, just kept on updating it. But I just want to know what you guys think. It's a real simple track. Not anything spectacular. Hopefully you guys can give a little advise on it.

Paul Van Dyk - Another Way (NSH Remix)

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Pretty good mate, but i didn't like the pad sounds, for some reason it sounded to sharp to my ears, but that might be just me. Overall it's good just with a few tweaking here and there.

Thanks for the reply
I kinda liked the pad, gives it a trancey atmosphere to it.

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build up seems a little TOO drawn out and almost disconnected what w/ the pad and then piano...

work on more flow

other than that, extrememly interesting melodies and such

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Originally posted by wizniz build up seems a little TOO drawn out and almost disconnected what w/ the pad and then piano...

I never thought about that. Maybe I should stay away from the piano, get more creative.

I'll try to fix in my next revision but I do like the long build up, with the mini snare roll at the end. Quite a few trance songs today build up just long, and even longer.

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http://s10.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...1E1AXK94UVZ4XPW

I updated it a few days ago.
Changed up some percussion, and added an acid bassline (first time doing it).

For better or worse lemme know what ya'll think

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