Hey Mate,

I would not call this a dark progressive trancer, but more a clubby light trancer. I think you have done the percussional work very nicely, because of the softer kick it gives the track a clubby feel. Also because the main synths you use the track never really becomes heavy or dark but it keeps being clubby.

Melodywise the track is really repetitive and not really intresting. If you would work on that department you could make some serious good music because I did like the way your percussion sounds.

At this moment no DJ in his right mind would play this track yet, or it would have to be Dj Jean

Cheers !

Thanks for your help Nomen,

I think your right about the melody, ive completly re-written it:


---> Stasis 2 <---

This is more uplifting trance i hope, anyone else care to comment plz!

(224k, 5mb, mp3)

thx

nice drive, damn.. very nice.. reminds me of Hammock Brothers - Sea..

nice percussions.. descent sweeping strings, nice and harmonic breakdown, i like the melody, pretty bright but still linear, and u bring back the track nicely from the breakdown, very nice synthwork as well.. this is a kinda chilled down trance track, its pretty good..

8/10

good work

edit: i only listened to the statis 2 sample

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Thx subtle.


I guess this is more chilled trance. Every time i try to make something banging it comes out cheesy or chilled why is this?

I've made it better, would any one else care to comment on this plz.

thz

--> Stasis <--