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first its obvious that i cant juge if its a good ''trance track''
but... i can juge the sound
when the track starts, the kick is good, ambiance too
but then when the line starts, the kick looses some power and seem to get it back a bit...just if like the volume was taken down & high
maybe he could lower the bass volume to get more power from the kick
i dont like trance, but until the first breakdown im not bored at all because he keeps a good ambiance
the little breakbeat in the first breakdown should be longer cause it sounds really good
the gapper/snipper effects are handled well enough imo
the main problem is really the kick that looses power at some points in the track... maybe some frequency is lowering it
after listening to the complete track, i can say that its not that repetitive
the melody is not really original... i mean im pretty sure it can be trance and sound less like the usual trancy pattern that doesnt stand out imo
work on the compression, volumes of lines
for the cuts, i think u could do it without effects just cutting it directly on the track and funkin it
anyway continue like that theres a lot of potential imo
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