nice fad in bassy intro.

Very funky rhythm.

The tempo could be a tad faster.

I can't really hear the bass drum.

Nice percs.

The organ is lame; in a cheese-funk sorta way

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Sounds nice and funky. Sounds quite fun, if not a little bit on the cheesy side. As also stated needs to be a bit faster really.

I wouldn't really class it as tech-house but play around with it and it could be a good funky house track.

sounding fresh and original
the melody isn't spot on rythmically, intended or not, and it kinda bothers me.
anyways, really cool track! loving the bassline

haha, this reminds me of second sun - everything for some reason.
keep it up

This needs alot of work. The bass is a good idea, tone it down, there is way to much distortion in the mix, use compression. What i can hear of it the percussion is ok, a bit more perc wudnt go a miss. Strengthen your kick and loose the square lead, thatz annoying. I like the filtering. Keep working at it.

tis aright, housey/pop that i see being used in gta or something...
the synth is really 80's sounding and tad bit off which i kinda like, but the organ's got to go or get it some beef...

Hey!

I think you've got a really good idea here. It's got a lot of attitude. The percs are really quiet, but it sounds like you're doing good things with them.

I hope you take some of the above suggestions and complete this track - I'd love to hear the finished product!

Thanks for sharing.. i enjoyed!
Trev

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