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I actually disagree.
I'm really liking these tracks. They're definitely more "chill" than something like Markus Schulz, but I'm really liking them. Very hypnotic, chill, type music that I'm digging at the moment.
My favorite would probably be "oleraceus", to be honest. Then "where I've gone".
Maternal Love is almost really good, but it doesn't catch my attention like the others do. That might partially have to do with the file quality. The other thing about it is...for me, the breakdown is confusing. You have a rhythmic synth-type instrument and the guitar starting at the same time, and to me the melodies of the two don't really go together. I'd rather not have the rhythmic synth, at least at that moment...just the guitar. I also feel the guitar needs to be "brought out" more. Whether you do this by simplifying other instruments when you bring it in or by EQing, either would be good. The other thing about this track (and all three tracks, really), is that they're a little bit drawn out. I feel like these should all be 6.5 minute tracks with the amount of material that's in there, and they're 8.5-10 minute tracks. I start getting a little bored around the 7 minute mark.
Other than those things, I really like them. I'll probably do a little bit of an edit just to shorten them slightly, and then I'd definitely play them out. I don't suppose I could get a good quality version of maternal love from you could I?
Good work dude.
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-Jon
www.DJjoncaserta.com - - mixes and whatnot (melodic progressive house and trance)
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