Hi... Commenting as I´m listening. This is really hard trance, I´m not too fond of the lead sound, it´s just too harsh for my taste and it could use some eq:ing. The lead sound also too loud I think, for example it´s pretty difficult to hear the bass now. I like the calmer part at around 2 min... nice chords. Also imo the snare has way too much reverb. I think the whole track is mastered little bit loud because there seems to be some clipping. This could work really well in the dancefloor with some further development.

Cheers, Lakeus

Btw check out my track if you´re interested and leave some comments...
http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...threadid=301443

cheers man some real constructive points there, will giv all those things a look over

will check your tune in day or two as on poor connection but il leave u some feedback

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Originally posted by kinetic yo guys would be awesome if any of you could hit me with some feedback on the track called reverence on this page : http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=376850 Cheers look forward to hearing what you all think

Hard stuff. It is all very harsh. The high frequencies have to be adjusted as it hurts my ears. The bass drum is Ok.The bass line could be deeper.

The pads around 2:00 are alright, though still a bit harsh.

Im gettin quite a bit of clipping.

The groove is awesome. I love the energy pumping out! If it wasnt so 'harsh' & peircing you would have a winner on your hands.

great work kinetic

Xeno.

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thanks man once again VERY constructive comments which il use when workin more on this track, il post again next week with a new version with some of the changes suggested made

please do check it then as id love to see if i make i do what u say properly, im very new to production and thus my idea of eqing etc might not be the same as urs so id appreciate all the feedback poss

jase

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